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hmm i've seen something similar to this....

Not bad, but i liked it better when it was called MOTION by EDMOND HAWKINS A.K.A. BREADSTORM! Its different movie, yes i know with color too. But please think of a more unique title! rating your movie however its way too short, and only has like 2 transformations. and if i say its way too short, it is! I know where ur coming from cause mine took me a straight week to do. I know im not the founder of this style, but please plug your ispirations! http://www.newgrounds.com/port al/frames.php?id=9273

dont dog this film w/out a good reason!

I don't understand why some people dont like this, it has violence. just cause you can't see it better than other animations (not that it should have been brighter) doesn't mean the violence sucked. i thought it was actually better than straight out gore. And the film is of perfect length in my opinion. i understood what was going on, who was the hero, and who became victorious. this is an anime style animation, appreciate it artisticly! Good job!

you could have done better

ok kudos on your the 3-d animation aspect of the film, ONLY if that was your own creation, and not a GIVEN model to work with.
BUT, (huge emphasis on this but) You needed more animation to get you into the story... draw the people in a panic (transparent behind the text) if your that artsy to think of a script of such "depth" Your choice of words should have been better.Your vocabulary was limited to that of a 7th grader..no offense, but if your writing a short story you have to impress us a little more... im no one to judge, but i know what i like.... you had to take this story a little further, because you quickly lost my attention.
dont take this as me being mean, but take it as constructive critism, i've gotten it in art college, but it made me better at what i was doing.
i look foward to seeing your next animation
you do a pretty good job on your mouth movements(on a good note)

DID U USE A 3-d Program w/ flash, or is that all..

hand made 3-d? if hand made, you've got talent...please respond in the reviews

NO ONE WANTS TO SEE A TRAILER!!! you suck

finish the movie so i can shit on it

ITS BEEN DONE!!!

IVE SEEN ABOUT 20 portal entries on how not to make an animation.....if your so good stop using your energy on crap like this and just make shit that you say, "you know who to do." (which you have yet to prove)

Im currently working on a new series for adult swim called SUPER JAIL! It premieres in October, be sure to check it out! oh yeah and it's all done in flash!

Edmond Hawkins @BREADSTORM

Age 42, Male

Animator

University of the Arts

Brooklyn, NY

Joined on 3/23/00

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